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Ayúdenos

By David Julian Avila

Smashwords Edition


Copyright 2011 David Julian Avila

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911. State your emergency,” Don checked the screen for the callers location information. The screen was blank where the address should be.

A frantic woman speaks, “Oh, Dios mío. Por favor, ayúdenos. Mi hija está muy enferma. Ella sangrando por entre sus piernas y su no parar. Ella acaba de tener un bebé, y creo que algo anda mal. Por favor enviar ayuda. Tienes que ayudarnos.”

Don tries to calm the caller, “Hold on Ma'am. Does anyone there speak English?”

Por favor enviar ayuda. Tienes que ayudarnos. Hay tanta sangre y no podemos conseguir que se detenga,” the woman pleads with the operator.

Don was a 10 year veteran emergency response operator and has heard everything that could go wrong over the phone. He could calm a raging bull if it called in an emergency. He never bothered to learn Spanish. It was never a requirement. All the new hires were bilingual and at least one were required to be on shift. Today, Miguel went home sick and Tony wasn’t due to be in for another 30 minutes to cover Miguel’s remaining shift.

Don looked to his partner, Scott, not sure what to do. The little county’s demographic was changing and changing fast. English was quickly becoming a second language. Changes were made in all levels of community service but their were still holes in the system. There is always someone on staff that speaks Spanish but today was a slow day. They had less than a normal amount of calls today. Miguel pleaded to go home before Tony got there. He reasoned with Don that no Spanish speakers have called all day and he was sure they weren’t before Tony got there. Don wished he didn’t give in to Miguel. This was all on him.

Don asked using what little Spanish he knew, “Ma'am, is there anyone there that speaks English? I don’t speak Spanish. Are there any ninos habla English?”

¿Qué? No entiendo lo que está diciendo. ¿Hay alguien allí que pueda hablar con quien habla español. Es mi hija. Ella es la hemorragia. Necesitamos una ambulancia.”

Ambulance? Do you need an ambulance?”

Sí, Por favor, apúrate, necesitamos una ambulancia para llegar a diecisiete de nogal sur treinta y cuatro.”

Wait, I don’t understand. Can you get someone who speaks English,” Don flips up his mic on his headset, turns to Scott, “Their address isn’t coming up. It must be a cell phone. The computer is trying to triangulate its coordinates but it being a dog. Scott, can you try and see where Anthony is at. If you can’t reach him, then call the police and see if they can translate.”

Policía? No necesitamos a la policía. No hicimos nada malo. ¿Por qué estamos enviando a la policía?”

Yes, we are calling the Police and they will hopefully have a translator. Please hold on the line for the Police.”

No, la policía. No puede ser que la policía viene aquí. No quiero problemas. Sólo quiero que mi hija al hospital. Mi esposo está trabajando en ello y no se ejecutará. Por favor, Dios mío, ayúdanos. Tenemos que llevarla al hospital. Ayúdenos. Ayúdenos.”

Scott interrupts, “Anthony is about 15 minutes away and the police says they’re in the same boat. All their Spanish speakers are tied up on a call and they are trying to locate someone on the next shift. They think they can scrounge up a night janitor but she’s not due for another hour when the office closes. What do you want me to do?”

Ma'am, help is coming but I need your address. The police doesn’t have an interpreter. Is there a neighbor that speaks English?”

Te dije que no la Policía. Voy a tratar de un operador diferente. Adiós.”

Click!

Hello? Ma'am are you still there? I think she hung up.”

The light board lights up. Don and Scott stare at the blinking light. Every time before they had never hesitated to answer the call. They know that every second is precious. Lives are saved or lost because of them doing their job quickly and efficiently. Every call is treated like it’s their own family calling in. But now for the first time, they both hesitate. For the first time they don’t know what to do and waste valuable life saving seconds. Scott answers, “911, State your emergency.”

Traté de llamar antes, pero nadie hablaba español. ¿Me pueden ayudar? Mi hija está muy enferma. Ella dice que ella está muy cansada y fría. No podemos darle calor. Ha perdido mucha sangre. Ella acababa de tener su bebé y creemos que puede ser algo salió mal. ¿Hola? ¿Hola? ¿Hay alguien ahí?”

Scott’s eyes show panic as he looks at Don, “I think it’s her. Ma'am, please hold on, we have someone coming right now.”

Don asks, “Is she still using a cell phone?”

Scott looks at his monitor, “Yes, there is no address. It’s trying to locate the phone but the computer is still dragging. Where is Anthony?”

¿Hola? ¿Hay alguien ahí. Necesito una ambulancia. Por favor, ayúdenos.”

Scott didn’t say anything to her. He just sat in his chair as the woman pleaded with him in a language he didn’t understand. What he does understand clearly is that they need help and he can’t provide it to them. In the background are cries from children and men yelling at the woman on the phone. He can only imagine that they are as frustrated as he and Don.

Every call that came into the office was a story about someone’s worst day. Don and Scott do their part quickly and smoothly. They are the beginning of a chain of events that work toward a goal to save lives. People call devastated and emotional wrecks and it’s their job to calm them down so that they can ask the information they need to send help.

In the background, Scott hears a man speak to the woman.

The woman drops the phone.

Scott hears nothing.

It’s silent.

No one speaking.

The woman screams.

Then Scott hears more screams, crying and chaos from faceless people, “¡Oh, Dios. Ella no está respirando. Maria! ¡despierta!”

The office door swings open and Tony runs in, “Are they on the line? Did you get an address?”

We got nothing, Tony”

Tony takes the phone from Scott, “¿Hola? 911! Estado de emergencia. ¿Hola?”

A man’s voice answers angrily in Spanish, “Now that my daughter is dead you can speak Spanish now. We’ve been on the phone with you for almost 30 minutes and no ambulance. My daughter is dead because of you. My wife said in America they send help. All you have to do is call and they send help, she said, but no one came. Why didn’t anyone come? I wanted to drive her myself but she said the ambulance has medicine that will help. But we will never know. We called for help and no one came. She has four children and now they have no mother. You go to hell.”

The angry man hangs up.

I drove as fast as I could.”

What happened, Tony? What did they say,” Asked Don

They... hung up,” answers Tony in disbelief.

Don sees his monitor light up with a call, ”911. State your emergency”

A young man pleads with Don to send an ambulance because his mother isn’t breathing.

I drove as fast as I could,” says Tony to anyone who will hear.


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